The Curmudgeon
For the second time this week a man came up the driveway and asked could he fish the pond. I said no.

I was second coating the white picket fence around the pool and I heard the sound of car wheels on a gravel road and then a two honk blast. Yeah, let me just stop what I'm doing, it ain't important. The man drove a small truck and if every man has a theme song this man's song would have been that dueling bangos bit from Deliverance.

He stayed in his truck and I kept my distance, bare-footed and shirtless and armed only with a paint brush taped to a stick. My ribs glinted in the noonday sun. He looked me up and down once in that way that reminded me of lonely truck drivers from back when I was a kid hitchhiking. He said he was staying in the truck because he been bit by a dog once and I used that creepy manner I sometimes use and said "well we ain't got a dog but it's better to be safe."

He said he would only use a fly rod and would catch and release but I dismissed his hopeful intentions with an I don't care about all that. I told him he was the fourth person to come asking for fishing priviledges this week (a lie based solely on the fact that I like the sound of four better than two) and that I didn't see what all the attraction to that little pond was. "I fish it every once in awhile and only catch the same damn sun perch each time," I told him.

The gardener came by later to water plants that I had not only already watered but had also painted a bit. "I should have ripped those out of the ground, why you plant something before I second coat the fence?" I bitched. Sometimes I think she playing with me, pushing my buttons on account of she knows I feel somewhat friendly towards her and she bored with whatever else she got going on. I myself am not that bored. I intend to proceed along the path of respectful behaviour. But don't come over here bothering me with your can I fish the pond shit. This ain't Mayberry RFD and I ain't Andy. And if you come up that driveway and stop me from whatever I'm doing it better be cuz you bringing me some food or beer. The gardener and her boyfriend have both intimated that I should be more hospitable, get out more, invite more people in, become more in tune with Rappahannock ways. Yeah, well, in due time. Until then though, tune this.
- jimlouis 6-30-2004 8:54 pm

yeah. more of that, your casa is my casa stuff. get wit it.
- bill 6-30-2004 9:27 pm [add a comment]


"The man's not right neighborly. I asked if I could fee-ish over t' the pond on his land, and he said no. And then I hear'd he was cussin' me out on the internet."

"Let's go git 'im, boys."

- tom moody 6-30-2004 10:01 pm [add a comment]


Just kidding ya, of course. Sounds like that guy wandered over from Luray. My family probably knows him.
- tom moody 6-30-2004 10:03 pm [add a comment]


john s wanted me to post this image for you. cant get the image to post so heres a link to the story and photo.
- bill 7-07-2004 9:04 pm [add a comment]


That is a curious thing, fish shooting, because I just last night watched this pretty mediocre but faintly, just barely enjoyable bit of flick in which Michael Caine and Duvall play curmudeonly uncles to this kid who is actually the kid from Artificial Intelligence and in that movie the two uncles shoot fish in their Texas stockpond. I don't want to give away the ending but they die and leave their money to the kid and you feel good enough to sleep through the night.
- jimlouis 7-08-2004 6:10 am [add a comment]





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